Revising & Editing - Xem lại và Chỉnh sửa

Written by Administrator on 14 October 2008.

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Hãy nhìn vào ví dụ dưới đây xem chúng tôi chỉnh sửa bài viết về chuyến đi ngắn tới Victoria như thế nào.

Bản nháp đầu

I taked a ferry from Vancouver to Victoria. I drove the car from the ferry to the centre of the city Got a bedroom on a hotel. We had dinner in a nice restaurant and we went to a music concert and we walked along the beach after the concert. I went to Bed at midnight then I had breakfast in the hotel. At the end I took the ferry back to Vancouver but I visited a beautiful garden before I drove to the ferry.

Chỉnh sửa

We took a ferry from Vancouver to Victoria. We drove the car from the ferry to the centre of the city. We rented a room in a hotel. We had dinner in a nice restaurant . We went to a music concert, and after the concert we walked along the beach. We went to bed at midnight and woke up at 8 in the morning. We had breakfast in the hotel. We visited a beautiful garden before we drove to the ferry to go back to Vancouver.

Bản hoàn chỉnh

We took a ferry from Vancouver to Victoria. We drove the car from the ferry to the centre of the city. We rented a room in a hotel. We had dinner in a nice restaurant. We went to a music concert, and after the concert we walked along the beach. We went to bed at midnight and woke up at 8 in the morning. We had breakfast in the hotel. We visited a beautiful garden before we drove to the ferry to go back to Vancouver.

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