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I live in Hanoi city and my house is very beautiful. There is a small garden in front of my house. My house has four rooms. They are sitting room, bedroom, kitchen and study room.

My house's sitting room has many things: For example: chair, table, TV set, radio-set, air-conditioner, sofa,...etc. There are a bed and a big mirror in my bedroom. My family has 3 persons and we both sleep in that bedroom. That bedroom is very large but it hasn't got many things.

There is a big fridge in the kitchen. We usually have breakfast and dinner in the kitchen. We has lunch at office everyday. I often read books in study room in the morning. I don't like watch TV and I usually go to bed at 11p.m.

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I live in Hanoi city and my house is very beautiful. There is a small garden in front of my house. My house has four rooms. They are sitting room, bedroom, kitchen and study room.

My house's sitting room has many things: For example: chairs, tables, TV set, radio-set, air-conditioner, sofa,...etc. There are a bed and a big mirror in my bedroom. My family has 3 persons and we both all sleep in that bedroom. That bedroom is very large but it hasn't got many things.

There is a big fridge in the kitchen. We usually have breakfast and dinner in the kitchen. We has lunch at office everyday. I often read books in the study room in the morning. I don't like watching TV and I usually go to bed at 11pm.

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I live in Hanoi city in a very beautiful house. There is a small garden in front of the house. It has four rooms, they are sitting-room, bedroom, kitchen and study-room.

The sitting-room has many things, for example, chairs, tables, TV set, radio set, air-conditioner, sofa, etc. There are a bed and a big mirror in the bedroom. My family has 3 persons and we all sleep in that bedroom. The bedroom is very large but it hasn't got many things.

There is a big fridge in the kitchen. We usually have breakfast and dinner in the kitchen. We has lunch at office everyday. I often read books in the study-room in the morning. I don't like watching TV and I usually go to bed at 11pm.